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Reader's Digest    

December 1995

"Trapped Under a Train"


    This story had so many good points!  It keeps you reading on.  You know the ending, but that just makes you want to know exactly how she got out.  It told you the problems in rescuing her, but they did.  It told of disaster and triumph, there were so many emotions in this one story!  I didn't think there were any bad parts to this story.  it was bad in that it wasn't fromher view.

    My story is not quite as exciting as this one.  It doesn't keep you on the edge of your seat like this one.   Also, "Trapped under a train" is longer, telling of an elapsed time, not just a single instance.


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